TIME - HAIKU HEIGHTS





Unsure, she blushed at his proposal,
but it was just a matter of time
for 'approval'.



I tried to stop time,
tried to rotate it back,
but it never stopped.


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This post is for Haiku Heights ( Prompt - Time )
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12 comments:

  1. kalpana solsi16:17

    The first one is so sweet and romantic and the second one is reality.done justice to both.

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  2. Reading Pleasure18:54

    Very well done. The first one is so sweet

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  3. Anonymous10:54

    Beautiful haiku and the first one so sweet =)

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  4. Ramesh Sood11:52

    Lovely haiku both...first one says a lot...Thanks...

    Here's inviting you to have a look :

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/past-glows-in-now.html

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    1. NandiniDeka11:28

      read yours, its quite interesting. Many thanks :-)

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  5. Susie Clevenger04:28

    Great haiku...love the second one!

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    1. NandiniDeka11:30

      thank you Susie, even i love the 2nd one :-)

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  6. Magical Mystical Teacher23:34

    The lesson of the clock must surely be this: Now is the only time we have. Tick, tock, tick, tock...

    Sleeping the Night

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    1. NandiniDeka10:16

      yep, you are right. thanks for reading :-)

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  7. eyeography06:56

    first one - just like what happened to me ;)

    beautiful haiku...both of them :)

    Check out my friend's hindi poetry
    http://myriad-sumit.blogspot.in/2013/07/barfby-sunil-gahlot.html

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