SQUEEZE - HAIKU HEIGHTS





Any last wish? he was asked,
he shook his head,
then his neck was squeezed.



Wanted to look slim,
had no option, but to,
squeeze her way in.

( Many people wear tight fitting clothes to look slim, do they succeed? hmmm )


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This post is for Haiku Heights ( Prompt - Squeeze )

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19 comments:

  1. That first one is so sinister. I have recently been dress shopping its so frustrating as dress are made without curves in mind (no room for breasts) so I sympathize with the girl

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  2. I read it, then read again and then read it for a final time. Superb :)

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    1. thanks for reading it 3 times :p

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  3. And I remembered something written by my brother long ago on similar lines: -
    Clalta dil ruk gaya, ruki gaadi chal padi
    Dhakka jo laga tha

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    1. Hindi Haiku?? :D

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    2. Its called Triveni. This was devised by Gulzaar.

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  4. Nice Haiku, beautifully composed.Reading again & again.

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    1. glad you liked it, thanks :-)

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  5. Both the Haikus are awesome...very well composed...

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  6. Very poignant Haiku. The second one made me smile!!

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    1. i was hoping not to offend anyone with the 2nd one, thanks a lot!

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  7. The last small lettered lines are hilarious..
    Nice haiku..Both extreme situations :)

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  8. super awesome Nandini loved both of them . the photos complimented bigtime :)

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  9. Loved both, esp the first one!

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