SWING - HAIKU HEIGHTS





From behind him, she hugged,
voices spoke in her mind,
and then she stabbed.

( schizophernia can swing entire personality of a person )



Young Tarzans are they,
latched on to the thick vine,
swinging through jungles divine.


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This post is for Haiku Heights ( Prompt- Swing )

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16 comments:

  1. Wow! The 1st one is intense!

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  2. I liked the second one more...perhaps remembering my own 'Tarzan' days ..it feels good to visit your page..have become a Member..and if you are going to be regular on Haiku Heights..we will keep meeting in this space...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/07/ah-swinging-childhoodhaiku.html#comment-form

    RS

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  3. Oh scary and intense that first one! And the second really captures boldness and exuberance of youth =)

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  4. Nandini - the first Haiku is "deadly" - great writing!

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  5. Wow! Really these Haikus are at their pinnacles.

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  6. Very interesting and intense !

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  7. I loved both! :) Immensely talented you are!

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    1. glad you liked it Jaseema :-)

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  8. loved the first one... very intense

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