Life isn't always pleasant; its filled with thorns and can be very bitter as well, Ashton realized when he saw his mother gripping through the pain of a nasty divorce, with having to bring up her teenage son all alone.

His mother cringed at any reminder of the glorious past she once had, with her ex-spouse, his father.

Parental crisis made Ashton very insecure about relationships.

He avoided what teenagers of his age craved – girls; until the universe one day conspired to make him stumble across Danielle.

Danielle’s beauty bowled him over, but could he take departure from his hidden fears?

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  1. Good question, oh yes he would!

  2. What a great story and you managed to complete 3 prompts!! Wow! Tracesofthesoul

  3. Very well done. Excellent in thought, feeling, and delivery.

  4. I hope Danielle conquers his fears

  5. If he succeeds in departure, it should be glorious for them …
    but a bitter end might bring a definitive stumble. Tay.

  6. thanks a lot everyone :-)


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