BEACH - HAIKU HEIGHTS



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Grainy sands tickle feet underneath,
face caressed by open seas breeze,
magic of beach.

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His arm around my waist,
mine around his,
beach weaves magic.

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Carefree without a worry,
in this world,
beach is liberating.


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This post is for Haiku Heights ( Prompt - Beach )
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9 comments:

  1. Uppal21:31

    Enjoyed the poetry in verse!

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  2. Lolly21:46

    the magic touch of the beach on both face and feet.
    well done, Nandini.

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  3. Ramesh Sood05:47

    Nandini...I don't know whether you will appreciate...yet I wish to express that if you keep the third line as only " liberating beach.." it will be a visual , more of a haiku..

    However I so find them really inteseting.. thanks for your visit to my page.

    RS

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    1. NandiniDeka16:03

      thanks for the suggestions...that one did come to my mind also 'liberating is beach', settled or the 3rd one which was this. thank you for reading.

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  4. Sumana Roy15:11

    A pleasingly relaxed world..........

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    1. NandiniDeka16:06

      beaches are a different world altogether, simply love them. Thanks for reading Sumana.

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  5. Reading Pleasure17:19

    lovely set of haiku

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