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WHAT LAY BENEATH






'What's that Jiya?' Seeri asked excitedly, as she spotted an unusual looking construct at the back of Jiya's house. 'Is that a pond?'

'Yea, frozen now,' Jiya replied, somewhat hesitant... instead tried to divert Seeri's attention, 'See those mountains over there, we get great views from here.'

Seeri dragged her eyes from the strange looking pond and went over to where Jiya stood, her mind still lingering at the pond, why Jiya didn't want to speak much about it, she wondered.

Jiya, meanwhile, was glad she diverted Seeri's attention, she could not disclose what lay beneath - secret, only she knew.




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This 100 word post is for friday fictioneers ( Image Copyright - © Sandra Crook )

10 comments:

  1. Anonymous13:36

    I'm thinking the worst here. - Sandra Castelsarrasin

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  2. I wonder what she hides there. Very mysterious.

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  3. Oh dear... best she not be too obvious as more questions can pop up! Nicely done!

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  4. Intriguing! Seeri is more curious than ever now!

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  5. Anonymous12:53

    Dear Nandini,
    An ominous piece.
    Shalom,
    Rochelle

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  6. Nandini, you have my curiosity running wild with what is hidden there. Hoping you might write a part 2 to this one??

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    1. lets see...thanks for reading..

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  7. thanks a lot everyone :-)

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