This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 41; the forty-first edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "SWEET AND SOUR" | ( Both two 55 fictions in poem format below are connected to each other )
1. Mood Swings...
Sweet and sour was his love,
One moment, he would grab her,
Rub his face against her cheeks,
And, rest his head on her shoulder,
Whispering sweet nothings…
Next moment, he’d push her angrily away,
Showering a volley of abuses,
A daily routine it was, inescapable,
Crazy passionate love making,
Followed by, violent mood swings.
2. The Maggi...
The Maggi was cooking in the pot,
Sweet and sour, it was hot,
She had this plan to surprise her hubby,
Since long...
Today was his birthday;
She slowly mixed in the poison,
A perfect opportunity she had finally seen,
After all though the violent times she’d been,
As he ate, the Maggi killed him.
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sweet and sour are your F-55s. perfect .
ReplyDeletethank you @Kalpana :-)
DeleteWow awesome...2 heading post is something i never thought about making.
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT 41.
thank you @Viyoma...same to you too :-)
Deletenice 55s and very well connected,well done
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteNice..:)
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DeleteAwesome! keep sharing and keep growing!
ReplyDeletethank you @Sameer and welcome :-)
DeleteGood one....
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteOhh that was nice! :)
ReplyDeletethis is a nice blog! :)
thank you @Yamini and welcome :-)
DeleteTruly Sweet and Sour :)
ReplyDeletethank you :-)
Deletelovely!! and the maggi thing was brilliant..didn't see her poisoning him! but connected to the first, he deserves it!
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteCold... But I liked it!!! I wrote one on similar line on Revenge ... Do go through and let me know if you like it!!!
ReplyDeleteEntered BAT after a long time and getting introduced to newer people and newer writing styles....
Read mine at Aashish - Sweet and Sour!!!
welcome @Aashish and ATB for BAT :-)
DeleteTruly sweet and sour :-)
ReplyDeletethank you @Mousumi
DeleteSour ending, but perhaps too true.
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteMaggi killed him? Hmmm.. :D Keep writing for BAT. Good Luck to you!!
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
thanks :-)
DeleteInteresting..I loved what you did with the theme :)
ReplyDeletethank you @Alcina :-)
DeleteOMG...the first 55F touched my heart and I could very much relate to it but the second 55F came as a shocker..!!
ReplyDeletegood one !!
Best Wishes..!
Here's my entry for BAT
thanks for reading and ATB for BAT :-)
DeleteLove and hatred ... but the end was great ...
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteWOW! Enjoyed reading your perfect 55!!
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
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