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COME ALONE!






'You have to come early this Sunday morning...before the crowds fill in.'

'But why, Jacob?'

'You'll find out...and, don't tell anyone.'

And, she went ~ excited, curious, nervous...why did he call her alone, she thought; it was Sunday, very early, there was no one...she looked around whispering, 'Jacob?'

She heard footsteps from behind, but, couldn't see him, where was he...why was he playing games; oh, don't keep such suspense, she wanted to scream...would he propose?

Just then, a piercing pain shot through her head; behind stood Jacob, revolver in hand - 'die bitch' he muttered with an evil grin.




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This 100 word post is for friday fictioneers, SixSentence ( Image Copyright – © Roger Bultot )

11 comments:

  1. Jacob clearly likes things done properly. Dumping her wasn't enough

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  2. I am thinking that will be the last time she listens to Jacob!

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  3. Some people just have to do everything in spades, don't they? Wow!

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  4. it was the least she expected. too late now.

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  5. What a horrific ending - that's what you get for trusting someone you thought you knew!

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  6. He's a scary dude, I hope he gets caught.

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  7. That took a dark turn! Poor thing.

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  8. What a sneaky b*st*rd! Using a holy place as bait. That's going to get him the "Hell Express," I don't care what she did to him.

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  9. Anonymous18:39

    Dear Nandini,
    Nope, definitely not a proposal.
    Shalom,
    Rochelle

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  10. Given where he chose to commit his crime, no doubt where he's headed when he dies!

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  11. Jacob's got serious relationship issues.

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