Her bodyguards would open the door as she'd arrive in the mall - her own luxury mall thronged by the who's who of the elite.
She'd make a special round on all the floors, taking a look at the premium brand-outlets that were leased, earning her the millions.
Oh she was rich, she had nothing much to do.
She'd have a special corner that'd display her love for the greens, her nursery - people could buy the exotic plants.
Maybe, she could give some for free.
A pigeon's coo brought her back to reality - darn, her mall was this old phone booth!
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Daydream is such an effective technique in writing.
ReplyDeletetrue...thanks
DeleteHa ha, love this!
ReplyDeletethanks :-)
DeleteA surprise ending! Love that.
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteBetter to nurture honest plants than have such dreams
ReplyDelete:-) :-)
DeleteThat phone booth with all those plants looks like a good use for it with the kinds of phones we have today.
ReplyDeleteyes...looks good too
DeleteDreaming doesn't cost. Nice take.
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteTo dream the impossible dream! Nice one.
ReplyDeletethanks ;-)
DeleteSometimes it is fun to build a castle in the air.
ReplyDeleteexactly!
DeleteNicely crafted! Love a good surprise ending.
ReplyDeletethank you so much :-)
DeleteMade me laugh! Very nicely done :) Best Dahlia
ReplyDeletethanks a lot!
Deletean ending i didn't expect. what a twist. well done.
ReplyDeletethank you :-)
DeleteOh I really liked this and I think I would much prefer this humble ohone booth to all that other ritzy stuff that sometimes stifles contentment
ReplyDeletethank you so much...yea a humble one is good too...its a lovely idea
DeleteAhhh daydreaming of a different life. Nicely done.
ReplyDeletethanks for your lovely comment :-)
DeleteDream big, but stay the course & feed them well. You never know, right?
ReplyDeleteAs I was reading, I was thinking this dream is going to pop her bubble! Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteFirst, I love that your MC dreams big; and second, you have to start somewhere. I hope her dream comes true. Fun story, Nandini.
ReplyDeleteDear Nandini,
ReplyDeleteShe's a dreamer, isn't she? Lovely story.
Shalom,
Rochelle