H - HEAVEN? HELL?



:: Today is H - HEAVEN? HELL? ::

Expecting heavenly bliss in the matrimonial life that lay ahead with Bob, Nina looked at the decorations excitedly. Everything was being readied. Infact, the whole neighbourhood was in preparation to bless the couple.

Though it wasn’t allowed to see the groom, the eve of wedding day; Nina broke the rules and crept into Bob’s apartment. Everyone was out shopping, but Bob would be home – and she wanted to surprise him.

She heard noises coming from Bob’s room. Opening the door, Nina froze on her tracks.

On bed lay Bob, naked, with his best friend Daniel. Nina’s heaven turned into hell.



NANDINI DEKA'S A-Z CHALLENGE
This post is part of the A-Z challenge for April'2014. Except Sundays, post everyday with 26 alphabets. Also posted for 100 words, Friday Fictioneers ( Image Copyright - DLovering ).
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40 comments:

  1. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields10:09

    Helluva thing to find out on the eve of your wedding.

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    1. NandiniDeka14:37

      it was a helluva prompt @Rochelle :-))

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  2. Anonymous10:14

    Damn...that's a surprise that got turned on its head pretty freaking quickly. On the bright side, isn't it better to discover who your fiance really is *before* you get hitched? Hope she recovers soon...

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    1. NandiniDeka14:38

      yea..its good she discovered it *before*

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    2. Anonymous04:55

      Dear Nandini, I'm having trouble leaving you a comment. Maybe I'm not on the list. Well, here's my two bits anyway - I like your story. How utterly terrible to find out your grooms' bi-sexuality than to walk in on Him and him. Nan

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  3. Anonymous10:21

    Eep. That is quite a bad surprise. I guess the wedding is over now, eh?

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  4. Anonymous11:24

    I didn't know whether to laugh at the irony or cry at her pain. Though I am glad Bob and Daniel can now be free to be together :-)

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  5. Soumya11:55

    Ouch! Just saved!

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  6. Rajlakshmi13:38

    Woa already she found before marriage. Brilliant story.

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  7. P.S. Joshi14:14

    I agree that it was better she found out the situation before marriage rather than get caught up in a terrible situation. I bet there's more care taken to know the next guy before arrangements are made. Good story with description to make it sound real. Well done.

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  8. brudberg14:46

    Ah.. I guess a menage au trois was never an option...

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  9. Anonymous15:48

    I, too, thought of weddings days that turn into hellish nightmares! I agree with Soumya - saved!

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  10. Anonymous16:57

    Ouch... that must hurt. Well, better now than later!

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    1. NandiniDeka17:47

      yes indeed....better now than later :o

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  11. janet17:32

    She obviously did surprise him and not just him. Definitely better to find out in advance but what a jerk Bob is for not mentioning this little item!

    janet

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  12. Sue Ann Bowling18:24

    This is an extreme case, but expecting marriage to be heaven is a setup for disaster.
    Sue Ann Bowling
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  13. Unknown21:15

    Yeah...that would be hell.

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  14. ElGuapo15:17

    Egad! Hope she doesn't throttle him with the streamers!

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  15. Unknown16:58

    Bob and Daniel! Who would have thought it. Poor Nina.

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    1. NandiniDeka11:15

      thanks @Patrick ...yup, who would've thought it :o

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  16. Siobhan21:09

    Better to find out beforehand but not nice for anyone involved. It still made me smile though I'm not sure whether it was meant to or not. I think it might be the name Bob

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    1. NandiniDeka11:17

      lol..ya of course its the name :p

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  17. Anonymous01:09

    Hell, indeed! We both went for weddings, but very different outcomes... terrible thing to learn, the night before your wedding.

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    1. NandiniDeka11:19

      yea..i read urs, have some issues commenting wordpress, thanks :-)

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  18. Anonymous01:55

    add pastel shirts to the gift list... good twist

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  19. Carrie17:28

    I guess the party will be a bit of a different flavor now! At least she found out BEFORE the vows

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    1. NandiniDeka18:08

      yes the party will have diff flavor for sure now :-)

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  20. S.K. Dubois02:28

    Hmmmm. What we have here is a failure to communicate.

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    1. NandiniDeka18:13

      yes.. you're right! thanks @Sorchia

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  21. Anonymous17:21

    Oh boy! No bride wants to find out she's just a beard!

    By the way, I enjoy reading your FF stories, but this site, unlike any of the other blogs, always throws up so many ads and animated graphics that my quad-core computer rebels. That's why I haven't chimed in recently. I don't know if there's anything you can do about that over here, but I wanted to let you know. I'm sure I'm not the only one, and it's a shame for you to lose readers.

    All my best,
    Marie Gail

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    1. NandiniDeka18:16

      thanks for reading @Marie Gail :-)

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