THE COFFIN



My Bed by Tracey Emin

The bed all messed-up,
Her stuff lay scattered.
They hunted; searched,
She was nowhere...
Until the unbearable stench,
Crept from somewhere.
Hammered open they; the box-bed,
Coffin that became;
Wherein her chopped-body laid.


This 33 word post is for Magpie Tales 212
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16 comments:

  1. Bekkie Sanchez19:13

    I had trouble leaving this comment on your blog. If my cursor goes off this box I can't type. Really weird I have never had it happen before and no it's not my computer.

    I loved your take and think of sleep as a tiny death each night anyway so the bed as a coffin was a fun read. Enjoyable!

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    1. NandiniDeka09:50

      hi Bekkie...not sure what the issue is...anyways glad you could post and many thanks.

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  2. 21 Wits20:31

    Oops, not a good sign for long life!

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  3. Wayne23:31

    Nicely done....thanks for sharing

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  4. Cait O'Connor16:38

    Scary!

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  5. ds19:25

    Yikes!

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  6. Belva Rae Staples23:16

    Creepy!

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  7. Helen18:40

    Oh my! I have a platform bed like this one ... Nothing in it though. Nice write!

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  8. Kathe W.19:34

    Had to look under my bed after rading this! Good one!

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  9. hyperCRYPTICal15:06

    Cleverly creepy!
    Had problems commenting here too - cursor flew off twice...
    Anna :o]

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    1. NandiniDeka15:48

      thanks! dont worry...my cursor keeps flying all the time... "-)

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  10. Tess Kincaid20:00

    Scary!

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