THE ESCAPE!



Copyright -Sandra Crook

“They’re going to kill you Sammy, if they find out,” Sammy’s uncle was all worries.

His nephew had done the unthinkable – robbed their rich landlord and escaped. It happened last evening. Sammy had crept indoors, and snapped the wires. With the mansion suddenly plunged in darkness, Sammy, all masked and holding knife in hand, asked the owners to hand over their belongings.

“These rich people deserve that. They are parasites, who build their wealth on our sweat and hard-work,” Sammy had disgust in his voice.

“They’ll be here any moment. Hide in my truck; we’ll leave the town at once!”


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21 comments:

  1. Unknown13:18

    Sammy is going to get himself caught with an attitude like that.

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  2. Anonymous16:22

    Hope he makes it!

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  3. liz young16:56

    I know we're supposed to feel sorry for Sammy, but armed robbery? I don't think so!

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  4. P.S. Joshi19:52

    Good story, well done. I think Sammy's gone way too far this time.

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  5. Anonymous20:37

    Well that's an angry Robin hood. nice one

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  6. janet21:10

    I agree with Lizy and P.S. He's gone too far. Well-written story, but I have the worst time trying to post comments on your site.

    janet

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    1. NandiniDeka15:42

      thanks @janet :-) i think there's some issue with blogger...i have issues myself too when replying.

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  7. Rajlakshmi06:42

    well someone has to speak up.. nice take on the prompt

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  8. Soumya07:48

    I hope he escapes on time. Beautiful take :)

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    1. NandiniDeka15:47

      i think he will...thanks @Soumya

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  9. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields09:46

    Dear Nandini,

    A good take on the prompt. But I think Sammy's headed for a life of trouble...possibly a short one.

    shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. NandiniDeka10:55

      thanks for the prompt @Rochelle :-)

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  10. Anonymous14:34

    It's kind of like the mob meets Robin Hood. Lots of anger and entitlement. Nice take on the prompt.

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  12. Shailaja V18:10

    Not someone I would welcome into my home,for sure ;) Interesting take.

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