MY GOD!




Addicted to my keyboard,
As I punch its keys,
It sits patient…
Instantly weaves; story, a poem
Sometimes naughty gossips, even…
My God, it is,
Every time I type,
It shows me heaven.


This 33 words post is for TrifectaWritingChallenge
Buddhist cosmology tells of Trāyastriṃśa, or the Heaven of Thirty-Three gods, which rule over the human realm. This weekend we're asking for exactly 33 of your own words about a god of your own devising that shares heaven with the other thirty-two gods.
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20 comments:

  1. Unknown22:45

    I can certainly relate to this God...oh how it captivates us! Brilliant! ♥

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    1. NandiniDeka01:34

      thanks :D am glad you relate to it..

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  2. Anonymous23:27

    Awesome - the writer as a supplicant to the keyboard.

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  3. Anonymous05:55

    Oh we've all felt the power of this deity *sigh*
    Great take!

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  4. Anonymous06:19

    Oh keyboards...I like this!

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  5. Unknown14:05

    Nicely done!

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  6. Anonymous03:14

    Yes indeed, it is God for most of us. Nice one for the prompt. :)

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  7. tedstrutz04:20

    Nice to see your God is by Apple... Mine too! I liked your phrase 'naughty gossips' aren't they all? Nicely done.

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  8. Ivy13:11

    Oh, I definitely see myself in this. :)

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  9. kymm23:20

    Keyboard as god... hmmm
    Feeling a little weird now, with my fingers on those keys!

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    1. NandiniDeka02:16

      dont worry..its a god that loves getting tapped on :D

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  10. Atreyee07:09

    Oooh,I love this God!!Great piece Nandini:-)

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