As the silver droplets
From the grey cloudy skies above,
Ceases to drop, I spot…
The rainbow of colours,
Chasing it for hours, I run to catch,
It first teases, tempts,
Then vanishes…
This 33 words post is for TrifectaWritingChallenge
This provokes a hopeful feeling despite the last line. Favourite line = "Chasing it for hours" It sits nicely among your description. Thanks for linking up!
It vanishes like a mirage. Nice take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteexactly like a mirage..well said @Kalpana :-)
DeleteVery lovely poetry!
ReplyDeletebest,
MOV
thank you @MOV
DeleteFun play on the word.
ReplyDeleteThanks @Sandra
DeleteLovely.. Says it all
ReplyDeletethanks for reading @Björn
DeleteI like this. It has a fanciful feel to it.
ReplyDeletethanks :-)
DeleteThis provokes a hopeful feeling despite the last line. Favourite line = "Chasing it for hours" It sits nicely among your description.
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking up!
thanks for the prompt!
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