Grainy sands tickle feet underneath,
face caressed by open seas breeze,
magic of beach.
His arm around my waist,
mine around his,
beach weaves magic.
Carefree without a worry,
in this world,
beach is liberating.
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Enjoyed the poetry in verse!
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteNandini...I don't know whether you will appreciate...yet I wish to express that if you keep the third line as only " liberating beach.." it will be a visual , more of a haiku..
ReplyDeleteHowever I so find them really inteseting.. thanks for your visit to my page.
RS
thanks for the suggestions...that one did come to my mind also 'liberating is beach', settled or the 3rd one which was this. thank you for reading.
DeleteA pleasingly relaxed world..........
ReplyDeletebeaches are a different world altogether, simply love them. Thanks for reading Sumana.
Deletethank you Lolly!
ReplyDeletelovely set of haiku
ReplyDeletethanks dear.
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