From behind him, she hugged,
voices spoke in her mind,
and then she stabbed.
( schizophernia can swing entire personality of a person )
Young Tarzans are they,
latched on to the thick vine,
swinging through jungles divine.
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Wow! The 1st one is intense!
ReplyDeletethanks @McGuffy :-)
DeleteI liked the second one more...perhaps remembering my own 'Tarzan' days ..it feels good to visit your page..have become a Member..and if you are going to be regular on Haiku Heights..we will keep meeting in this space...
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thanks and welcome!
DeleteOh scary and intense that first one! And the second really captures boldness and exuberance of youth =)
ReplyDeletethanks :-)
DeleteNandini - the first Haiku is "deadly" - great writing!
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteWow! Really these Haikus are at their pinnacles.
ReplyDeletethanks a lot!
DeleteVery interesting and intense !
ReplyDeletethank you Aziz :-)
DeleteI loved both! :) Immensely talented you are!
ReplyDeleteglad you liked it Jaseema :-)
DeleteAwesome
ReplyDeleteloved the first one... very intense
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