Any last wish? he was asked,
he shook his head,
then his neck was squeezed.
Wanted to look slim,
had no option, but to,
squeeze her way in.
( Many people wear tight fitting clothes to look slim, do they succeed? hmmm )
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That first one is so sinister. I have recently been dress shopping its so frustrating as dress are made without curves in mind (no room for breasts) so I sympathize with the girl
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteI read it, then read again and then read it for a final time. Superb :)
ReplyDeletethanks for reading it 3 times :p
DeleteAnd I remembered something written by my brother long ago on similar lines: -
ReplyDeleteClalta dil ruk gaya, ruki gaadi chal padi
Dhakka jo laga tha
Hindi Haiku?? :D
DeleteIts called Triveni. This was devised by Gulzaar.
DeleteNice Haiku, beautifully composed.Reading again & again.
ReplyDeleteglad you liked it, thanks :-)
DeleteBoth the Haikus are awesome...very well composed...
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteVery poignant Haiku. The second one made me smile!!
ReplyDeletei was hoping not to offend anyone with the 2nd one, thanks a lot!
DeleteThe last small lettered lines are hilarious..
ReplyDeleteNice haiku..Both extreme situations :)
:D
Deletesuper awesome Nandini loved both of them . the photos complimented bigtime :)
ReplyDeletethank you @Mysay :-)
DeleteLoved both, esp the first one!
ReplyDeletethanks @Me!
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