This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 48; the forty-eight edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "APOLOGY" | ( Two inter-linked 55 Fiction )
1. The Apology Note...
She woke up to a terrible headache. Her head still had a slight bump, where he hit her with an iron rod. Her body ached as she tried to drag herself out of bed. The sheets felt wet; he had raped her till she bled. In the mirror an Apology note was stuck, as usual!
2. No More Apology...
With disgust she tore the Apology note. It was his usual game. She’d been bearing the brunt of his sadist whims, almost everyday. That night as the torture resumed, she was ready. Her hand clutched the knife tight; waiting to strike. As he pulled her harshly towards him, she stabbed him. No more Apology notes!
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Revengeful.....& why not...there are ample reasons for her to do so. Are you referring to marital abuse ? I felt so.
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yes!
DeleteNice storyline and well summed up in 55 words.
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My Entry for BAT48
thanks @gkam :-) Wish you the same.
Deletestory and a counter story , pain was visible throughout, well written
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"Two step story" is a good idea.
ReplyDeleteEnough is enough... Poignant...
ReplyDeletethanks @Nimi :-)
DeleteNice take on the topic. A social issue highlighted in a brilliant and engaging narrative.
ReplyDeletethanks for reading n feedback :-)
DeleteShort but still you managed to say it all
ReplyDeleteyeah...kept it short :-)
DeleteI loved this!
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DeleteVengeful! Loved it.
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