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THAT ADMISSION





Half-hearted, she looked at the decorations she had spent hours to prepare - the perfect setting, only for him, them!

But would there ever be a 'them', was its all one-sided?

Alone, she stood, knees almost trembling not making it to the chairs she so enthusiastically had arranged.

Those hints and shy smiles, the healthy flirting - did she just over-think and day dream after all?

She just couldn't grasp what he said on phone, it was unbelievable; not this day at least, when she was about to blurt her feelings for him.

But, what about his admission, that he was gay?









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21 comments:

  1. Neil MacDonald10:52

    She may have found herself a good friend

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  2. Anonymous14:29

    So very well-dosed, with the surprise at the last moment...a chuckled at first..then a thought...that there is real sadness there...very well written,
    —cанта

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  3. Anonymous15:35

    Hopefully you'll all remain the best of friends.

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  4. Sandra Crook17:22

    Oh dear, that didn't go the way she was hoping. Not sure there is much to be salvaged here except perhaps a solid friendship?

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    1. NandiniDeka08:56

      Maybe but not sure if she wanted that...

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  5. Anonymous18:49

    Nice twist at the end. Hopefully they will remain friends.

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  6. Dale19:01

    Sometimes it's best to find out sooner rather than later

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  7. messymimi00:58

    It's not easy, no matter the reason it doesn't work out. Nicely told!

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  8. GirlieOnTheEdge15:25

    How disappointing! It took a lot of courage to be ready to confess her feelings. Perhaps all is not lost.

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  9. The Sicilian Storyteller18:50

    No reason they can't remain best of friends, unless she can't handle the truth.

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  10. JadeLi18:27

    I hate it when that happens! Unrequited love can be the strongest love of all, but it's based in fantasy after his admission. Well-told story, Nandini.

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  11. Solothefirst03:19

    I can hear her disappointment. This could be the start of a wonderful friendship though.

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  12. NandiniDeka08:58

    Thanks a lot @everyone.. much appreciate

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  13. Anonymous12:30

    Dear Nandini,
    What a bitter disappointment. At least he's being honest with her. Well done.
    Shalom,
    Rochelle

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  14. Nobbinmaug01:21

    If only there were a way to read people for those of who don't do it so well before feelings creep in. Very relatable story.

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