BACHELOR





He, the hot swanky bachelor,
She, demure timid spinster,
He, the gals that went gaga for,
She, never glanced at twice or more,
Never the twain shall meet, they said,
But universe had their destiny conspired,
Opposites attrack and how,
When she dashed against him, he went 'Ow',
Hot coffee spilt, ruined his precious suit,
What followed was instant rebuke,
Until he saw her moist green eyes,
Drowned instant he, in those iris pools wide,
Time ceased to exist,
Both stood transfixed,
Something clicked so deep,
Rings exchanged in leap,
He now no longer bachelor,
Neither she a spinster.


This 99 words post is for TrifectaWritingChallenge
Theme : This week we are giving you a page from the Oxford English Dictionary. The ninety-ninth page, to be exact. From this page, you can choose any word, any definition, to use in your post. And instead of our typical 33-333 word limit, we are asking for 99 words exactly. WORD - BACHELOR
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32 comments:

  1. Kir18:58

    My hopelessly romantic heart just loved this. Isn't this every good Rom/Com? The opposites attract and like magnets, just come together. You wrote it with just the right sizzle, just the right dash of romance.

    :)

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  2. Rajeev Moothedath03:36

    liked it.Thanks

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  3. JannaTWrites04:38

    What a great love story. I've heard of meeting over coffee, but this takes it to another level :)

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  4. Anonymous00:03

    Such a sweet little love story! I love the serendipity of it all.

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  5. indu chhibber07:37

    Lovely humorous ditty.

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  6. Cifar08:55

    nice attempt superb writing

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  7. Unknown12:40

    Write a story about it. It'd be more interesting :)

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    1. NandiniDeka13:42

      hmmm...it was a 99 word prompt :-)

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  8. Ankita15:32

    Hii

    Awesome!!! lovely..so well penned.. :)

    keep writing!

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  9. Anonymous16:14

    Filmy!! Loved it!

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  10. Anonymous18:41

    loved it... dont know how you can articulate words so easily and express so much in so limited words...

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  11. Unknown18:57

    so nice

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  12. Sini Rachel19:07

    That's straight out of Bollywood. Love at first sight always melts you.

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    1. NandiniDeka23:05

      oh yea...theres always something special abt love at first sight :-)

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  13. Unknown23:59

    again a great post of you!! Loved d way you articulated words in it...

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  14. Trifecta04:01

    See that? Sometimes you just have to wait for Mr. Right to come strolling along. I like it. Thanks for linking up. Don't forget to vote.

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    1. NandiniDeka11:29

      yea..absolutely!! thanks for the prompt :-)

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  15. Atreyee07:36

    Very cute!

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  16. An Indian Writer08:26

    Good one.

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