Rust is good I say, you ask me why,
Rusty old car or a cupboard,
Cycle or barbeque pit,
Symbol of getting old,
Rust is too, human,
With time it age,
Obsoletes,
and then,
dies!
( poem based on nonet style with syllables in each line going from 9 descending to 1 )
oh rust is def a human trait too...like the metal we show our age...but it can be just as pretty...smiles.
ReplyDeleteyes can be pretty and oh its definitely a human trait...thanks @Brian :-)
DeleteSo very true....I agree rust can apply to everything!!
ReplyDeleteyes it can be applied to everything!
Deleteyour words provoke a depth of thought/ looking at not only the world around us but the decaying life within that at times we would rather push away to another time
ReplyDeletevery well said @Leslie. thanks a lot.
Deletegreat take
ReplyDeletethanks @Laurie.
DeleteI am creaking with sge as we speak....cackle!
ReplyDeletethanks for reading @Sherry :-)
DeleteAge.
ReplyDeleteTrue rust can be found everywhere, even within ourselves!
ReplyDeleteyes...its within us too. thanks :-)
DeleteSo true..we humans rust, some quicker and more completely than others..great piece
ReplyDeleteoh yes...some do it quicker and more completely....you said it better. Thanks Susie :-)
DeleteRust always takes its toll, if we let it! Well captured and thought provoking.
ReplyDeletethank you @Alan
Deletevery true! awesome lines! am glad i find ur blog its really beautiful with the play of words, from nw am gonna be a regular follower of uir blog :) i hope u visit mine too!
ReplyDeletethanks @Anjali and welcome :-)
DeleteWonderfully done and i like this poetry style, will try it:)
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteI am rusty ~~~ I am alive!!!! :-)
ReplyDelete:-)
DeleteRust is pervasive, sometimes we welcome it sometimes we resist it_this form was a nice choice for your words--disappearing bit by bit :-)
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
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