Two extreme lifestyles,
dwelling side by side,
an urban reality.
Impressive structures in the horizon,
cross the garbage first,
to reach.
Why go to himalayas,
when there are mountains,
in my backyard.
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This post is for Haiku Heights ( Prompt - Urban )
Great haiku...there is a lot of pain in urban reality
ReplyDeletethank you @Susie.
DeleteThere is a certain level of irony in these haiku. Interesting thoughts.
ReplyDeleteBut the third one - I LOVED it. Totally. :D
thanks, i like it too. btw i read urs as well..liked the Rs12 one a lot.
DeleteI like the last one...
ReplyDeletethank you.
DeleteWell done!
ReplyDeletethank you Mama Zen.
Deletereally enjoyed your take on it..
ReplyDeletethanks a lot.
DeleteMy favourite, Nadini, would be third one..I like the imagination there..lovely..and thanks for your visit to my page..it emboldens..
ReplyDeleteRS
thanks :-)
DeleteYour Haiku have captured the raw truth very well.
ReplyDeletethanks Reshma!
DeleteAll the Haiku are very impressive and genuine ... Great!
ReplyDeletethank you.
DeleteI really loved the last Haiku...well done!
ReplyDeletethanks for reading Himani :-)
DeleteLovely ND, last one is perfect.
ReplyDeletethanks Sfurti :-)
DeleteA true depiction of our urban India...
ReplyDeleteA mix of contradiction...
Just loved it!
thanks for reading @Satya.
Deleteyes..the first one is really an urban truth...
ReplyDeletewell written haiku...all of them :)
thanks Sumit :-)
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