Soft music slowly fills the fragrant air,
Couples up across floor, affectionate display.
He then slips his strong arm, around my waist,
Tugs, pulls and seductively teases.
Waltzes me around in a flirty embrace, I sway,
His breath hide and seek on my neck, play.
Whispers in my ears, unsaid sweet nothings,
Oblivious to the curious surroundings.
Bodies touch, warmth exchange on a rhythmic cue,
Desires rise with those gyrating moves, raising tempo.
Taking every chance, my skirt twirls like a vivacious flamingo,
Both lost in an insatiably passionate tango.
Copyright 2013 © Nandini Deka
Nice.
ReplyDeletethanks :-)
Deletenice read!..:)
ReplyDeletethank you @Sahi :-)
DeleteWow!! Romantic and flirtatious!! :) right mix for two to tango!!
ReplyDeletethank you Aditi..glad you liked it :-))
DeleteThat is such a cool poem! Romantic, flirty and heady :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much Bhavya!
DeleteThe feeling is described correctly. This is what my dance partner said it's like!
ReplyDeleteheya...thats cool, i'm glad it matches what your dance partner feels like :-))
Deletebeautiful,, do u tango?
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thanks SJ! Not really...just tried few times...but I really love watching the pros do it...its just awesome and sensuous.
DeleteBeautiful lines..:-)
ReplyDeletethank you dear :-)
Deleteromance in dance presented aptly !! :)Nice read !
ReplyDeletethanks @mysay :-)
DeleteNice composition. Great weave of words. Like the words": 'passionate tango'
ReplyDeletethanks a lot!
DeleteLiked the rhyming last two lines. :) In my case, I would write a solo tango poem. :D
ReplyDeletethank you....solo tango would sound cool too ;-)
DeleteWell composed. Seeing the picture, I felt they are not two tange but char tango.....Lol!
ReplyDeletehaha there are definitely 'chaar taange' in two to tango, you observed right :-))
DeleteBeautiful Indeed! And finally I am able to comment here as well. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeletethank you so much Swati :-)
DeleteInteresting "Twosome"! :) i'd rather prefer watching 'tango' than actually do it, but yeah..will try it once for sure and whenever it'd be, that would be coz of this very poem! :) Thanks Nandini.
ReplyDeletethanks...it'd be cool if u wanna try tango bcos of this poem :-)
DeleteGood one...it's always the presence of the loved one...that makes life a Tango...!!!
ReplyDeletethanks...yea the loved one's presence certainly makes life a tango :-))
Deleteloved it...the passion and the heat comes alive ..
ReplyDeletethanks Neelima :-)
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