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THE TORCH



Lighting the torch she heads out the small path,

its the path that leads to the ocean from her home,

a village path, untouched by the nuances of modern world,

the torch is all they have, after dark.


As the splashes of waves against the rocks she clearly heard,

she tries to look and give way to any boat that approached,

but, her main aim is the yearn and hope in her eyes,

that weeps and pleads for her son to return.


Son, who till date after years, still hasn't shown up,

she refuses to believe the rumours she often heard,

no, her son cannot drown; they are the fisherfoks, ocean their playground.


Her son will return one day, if not today,

he'll need the light to get to home and relish the food she prepared,

she knew the wait would be as usual long,

thats why she prepared a torch that'd last till dawn...




14 comments:

  1. ...and always let your light shine.

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  2. Divine message ~ thanks,

    Wishing you good health, laughter and love in your days,
    clm ~ A ShutterBug Explores,
    aka (A Creative Harbor)

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  3. I love the story telling in your poem - it gives a sense of light amidst the darkness- Jae

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  4. Keep that torch burning. There is hope as well as light.

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  5. Hope is always needful...

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  6. Hope is a bright spot in sometimes dark times

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  7. Sometimes, hope is all we have left, and it is hope that keeps us going.

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  8. As long as there's light, there's hope. A touching tale indeed.

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  9. A poignant image of a mother's enduring hope. Beautifully written.

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  10. My heart aches for mothers who wait

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  11. thanks so much @everyone for all your lovely comments. Really appreciate ;-)

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  12. I love this! A wonderful story, and a great way to use the prompt word.

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