Theme for Jan 10, 2014 'WOW' : ‘Love Sho(r)ts!!’ Your post must contain the word Love and you have just 5 sentences to complete your story.
“Love? Hahaha,” he laughed out loud, the most cruelest joke he had ever heard – the word ‘love’!
He stared coldly at her body, stained and lying lifeless now in a pool of blood in front of him; her neck he slit just moments ago.
He had loved her since childhood, worshipped her every waking moment; dreamt of making her his wife.
She loved his attention too, accepted his expensive gifts; chatted and flirted with him often, giving coy encouraging looks.
In the end, without a backward glance she went off into the other man’s arms; that bitch deserved this end!
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Hmmm... a lot of Bollywood fizz here. Were you sipping ThumsUp while writing this post, Nandini? :)
ReplyDeleteArvind Passey
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:D :D
DeleteArguably the most unusual take on this prompt!
ReplyDeletethanks for reading :-)
DeleteInteresting angle on love and exploring of human emotions. Deftly handled, Nandini:)
ReplyDeletethanks @vishalbheeroo
DeleteOmg!!! Such a cruel take over Love. Love for love kills love.
ReplyDeleteCheers!!!
Silly Smiles... Take you Miles :)
love has its darker shades too i guess :-)
DeleteBetrayal and revenge and two factors for murder. a bit scary but very well written.
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha Tragedy! But loved the way you wrote it :)
ReplyDeleteA very different take on the subject but a very good one too :-)
ReplyDeleteGlad to see a girl's fault this time.
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