“Want to be Dare-Devils, then, pass the entrance-test,” the leader said; a twisted smirk playing in his face, “and that’s ‘Be Obedient; stay put inside our Hotties’ until times up!”
Pointing his finger at the hotties – half-buried vertically into the ground, he added in a raspy voice, “in that position; and remember, no sign of fear or you’re out!”
The newbies looked nervously, but went ahead in somber mood.
“What are you doing,” the leader’s assistant asked horrified, seeing him light the petrol-trail behind the cars.
As the cars went up in flames with the entrants inside, the leader smirked, “No sign of fear, I said; they didn’t obey!”
Copyright 2015 © Nandini Deka
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