INSPECTOR ON DUTY



The hideout-cabin smelt of rotten-dead. Their suspicion came true when they discovered several decomposed bodies; his victim’s, with wet-sticky substance oozing out of them. The sickening-sight made Clara almost puke.

But, inspector on duty, holding the mask over her nose tight, she went ahead discovering the butchered-bodies!

He was dead now, but she remembered him when he was a little boy. Neighbours, they used to hunt caterpillars together. “I like to see them rot,” he used to say, with a sadist smile then.

Sad, he extended his hobby to humans; Clara felt a tear trickle down the corner of her eyes.

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11 comments:

  1. Bad behavior starts early.

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    1. yup, they show signs early :-(

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  2. I assume they are related. Sad story.

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  3. Yes, you got it right, the cruelty symptoms can start early.

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    1. thanks @Elizabeth :-) yeah..they do, sadly

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  4. Dear Nandini, Good story. Too bad he was a sadist! You did a really good job showing the turmoil Clara felt about a childhood friend turned monster. Nan :)

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  5. Nandini, Good and well-written story. Children like that scare me. They need help, but parents are often in denial. ---Susan

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    1. thanks :-) yup, they need help early on, and signs are there.

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  6. Good take on the prompt. Left me with a creepy feelilng - well done.

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