GODS GIFT





I sat frowning,
My mood upset,
Why this world, I thought,
Is so twisted?
Why can’t people let others be,
Why to succeed, the need to trample thee?
Expectations unreasonable they keep all times,
Hoping we will gladly fulfill, compromise.
Every institution corrupt, and,
Filled with stenchful greed,
To clean our souls,
Is the urgent need!
In all these mess,
I’d like only one change,
God, please gift mankind,
Their lost innocence.


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26 comments:

  1. Beautiful thought Nandini :)

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  2. Wouldn't that be a wonderful gift? Doesn't even need to come gift wrapped!

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    1. you're right!! doesn't need to be gift wrapped.

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  3. Oh yes the lost innocence would be a gift indeed.

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    1. and urgently needed too :-) thanks for reading @Peggy

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  4. If you listen, you will hear my amen.

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  5. That would be a lovely gift indeed. I like where you went with this prompt:-)

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  6. I really like the way you think :)

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  7. Beautiful .. If only God could grant this wish :) very nicely written !

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    1. yep if only....i hope God grants this wish, thanks dear

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  8. Beautiful thought indeed.

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  9. Lovely desire, Nandini. I used to wish again and again, like a fool, that God had created man (and woman, no doubt) with a slightly different nature: unable to commit evil.

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  10. Lost innocence what am amazing beautiful thought, hats off to you.

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    1. heya...thanks a lot dear

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  11. Brilliant and different..loved it!

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    1. thanks for reading, m glad you liked it :-)

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