SHE WALKED ON




The pain came back,
It was the same numbing cramp,
Unbearable, disorienting…
The hollering crowds made it worse,
Yet she couldn’t take a break,
Had hungry mouths to feed…
Unflinching, she walked on!

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5 comments:

  1. The power of the will well communicated.

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  2. Strong, determined writing. Yay!

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  3. The rising pressure in this is cool. May she succeed! Thanks for sharing and don't forget to come back and vote!

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  4. thanks a lot @everyone :-)

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