REMEMBER?




Remember the first time we met?
and fell in love
The first time we became ‘one’?
Do you remember, when I fell sick
you stayed awake whole night?
.....
In coma, he remembered nothing!


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5 comments:

  1. Love your title with its question mark and doubt, which is layered throughout until your final line. Nicely done. Thanks for linking up!

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  2. Oh, so much promise and hopes dashed so quickly.

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  3. Very good one, but sad!

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  4. thanks everyone :-)

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