STEPS - POETRY JAM





I
Preen,
I Prance,
Down the steps,
Straight from the heavens,
In my new life on earth, I breathe,
Ignorant, untouched, demure, shy and still very raw,
Till suddenly the realities of the world strikes and strips me off my innocence.


( poem based on fibonacci style in 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21 syllables count )

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12 comments:

  1. Oh, I am sure that there are many things in this world that coould take away a person's innocence.

    Glad to see you at Poetry Jam.

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    1. thank you Mary, glad to be there too :-)

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  2. We can see you go down those steps, from heaven into a world that gets bigger as you discover it. Great use of the form.

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  3. enjoyed your steps... :)

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  4. the world will def do that to angels...stripping away what makes them special...if we let it

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  5. Life nicely depicted. And loved your poetry form.
    Dropping by from the Poetry Jam linkup
    Suzy at Reflections of my soul

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  6. Lessons learned along the way do often strip the innocence off and leave a rough patina ... darn it!

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    1. very true! thanks @Susan :-)

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